Thanks for your advice guys ... yes I agree this could be improved greatly, although I only had 2-3 hours to do it in for the client, so I had to work fast, and as a result lost out on quality.
Randy: yes, sorry, my notes were incomplete, they were truncated by SMN (I probably went over 500 characters) ... and I'd actually left cue 2M2 on the end of my track by mistake :-)
The first cue ends where the tension builds as the assassin approaches a wounded target and it goes silent just before he shoots him point blank (nice)!
It cuts to our hero running away. That's the end of 2M1. The second cue is the hero arriving at an old friends house after a narrow escape.
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